Category: Writers Block
Covered by thick walls of darkness that keep all feelings away.
Please don't break through, this is where I want to stay.
Cause numbness is my safe place, my salvation.
It protects me, shutting out every sensation.
Let it be dark, let it be night.
I am not ready to see the light.
Don't let this numbness ever go away.
Please stay with me darkness, I can't face the day.
It's... haunting. You write simply but you have the power of laying bare and clear exactly what the poem means. You remind me of someone I knew sometimes in that aspect.
Lory, that's reallly ... sad. And I really like your writing style, it's not complex like most writers. It's really simple, and yet, it's powerful at the same time
Lory, that's reallly ... sad. And I really like your writing style, it's not complex like most writers. It's really simple, and yet, it's powerful at the same time
numbness?
do you say this is what you wanted? if you say yes, which means you're lying.
if you're sure of your decision that you want to be in dark, you don't wana see the brightness, you want to be in between the four walls, you won't be logging into this site. you won't be talking to anyone. you won't be talking even with your stella, you see.
as per my opinion, this could never be happened. I can say I want peace I love silence. I love to hear the wind's blowing. I wana hear sound of the waves without any intereption. I love to learn the language of flowers and plants.
Raaj.
Lory, it's sad, and beautiful, and will be ok, one day.
Hey Lory,
I agree with Iyana that your poetry is powerful, yet simple.
Hang in there, and keep writing!
Iris
I think it's a beautiful piece and quite sincere from his point of view. Sounds to me he's looking to "tune out" and it shows in his writing. What a shame.
Oh wow, Lory, I love it. You're very tallented, and I feel exactly what you are trying to say.
lory, verry nicely done, see, you really doo write well.
Simple yet verry deep from the heart, nice. You remind me a little of me sometimes
Hey, you did a great job with your poem. Your title followed each line consistently. Well done good job.